I like this lede from the article "The Second Coming of Gene Therapy" because it made me interested in what the speaker was talking about. I normally don't like ledes that start with a quote, but this one worked for me. The rest of the paragraph provided information about a disease called "Bubble Boy" or severe combined immunodeficiency. This lede was attention grabbing and was meant for a reader with a heart. People will most likely feel for the womans' daughter and want to know what's wrong with her. That will make them read on and discover more about the truth of gene therapy.
Monday, September 28, 2009
The Second Coming of Gene Therapy
I like this lede from the article "The Second Coming of Gene Therapy" because it made me interested in what the speaker was talking about. I normally don't like ledes that start with a quote, but this one worked for me. The rest of the paragraph provided information about a disease called "Bubble Boy" or severe combined immunodeficiency. This lede was attention grabbing and was meant for a reader with a heart. People will most likely feel for the womans' daughter and want to know what's wrong with her. That will make them read on and discover more about the truth of gene therapy.
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